They say words come to me easy
That my words lie motionless,
Swirling on the surfaces of my raw emotions
Raw emotions
They say
That all I do is pluck them out like apples from orchards
Slowly. Slowly. Slowly.
Done.
Words don’t come to me easy,
I don’t pluck them out. I wrench them out bare-handed or from weapons
Weapons of my past
Whichever leaves me writhing or shattered
Because,
Someone told me art never comes from a place of happiness
I know my art doesn’t. It’s an act of redemption and mental self-flagellation
But my hurt has a purpose.
Words don’t come to me easy,
I revisit antiquated memories that were better off untouched,
I visit them. Breathe them. Chase them.
And when they consume me, my thoughts deftly sieve out the pain on my sheets.
Don’t you dare say words come to me easy,
They don’t.
I allow them to spew acid inside my being
Char my insides
Cripple me hopelessly
And you say they come to me easy.
– A
Wow! Powerful!
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Thank you 😁
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Awesome 😍
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked.
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“It’s an act of redemption”…. “my hurt has a purpose” – how true!! – loving it all – your honest and earnest expressions!!
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Raw poetry they say. :p
Thank you!
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I dont know what you mean by raw poetry – but I would like to take it as true and honest writing – without going undercover or hiding between lines! Your style and words are powerful and I love the way they flow in here!
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Amazingly powerful and so true. It is sad you have to suffer the pain that these words arise from Xxx
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Thank you. The pain comes to good use on some days though. 🙂
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Exactly, anyone can feel pain, but to transform it into beautiful writing is a gift X
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really beautifully written, and though it is true and unfortunate that no one can express in art what they can’t feel, but that’s the transformation power of writing, it give words to your pain ,make it beautiful,giving justice to it which no one else can give.
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I’m very happy that you understand the predicament. Thank you. ❤❤
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Extremely beautiful.
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Thank you so much! 💙💙
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Extremely beautiful and powerful, loaded with so much emotions. Like it a lot
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Thank you again :))
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my pleasure
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Mastery of language
affords remarkable power.
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Well said. Thank you.
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Very powerful! Thank you for following my blog. Blessings and peace. See you soon✌
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Looking forward to your posts as well. I like what I see so far. Have a great day/night/twilight (depending on which time zone you’re in) ❤❤
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You as well. Thank you.💙
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Powerful and raw. Great work. 🙂
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Thank you Bob. Much appreciated.
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Of course the words come easily, gushing from the pain or emotion—but that is anything but easy. This is a fine, clearly stated poem, and given the long and short lines, I hear a jazz rhythm.
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Thank you. I can understand that you have done some close reading over here, and I’m very glad.
Thank you for your valuable feedback.
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